hey! that was an awesome poem rachel i liked it...i didint really get t till like the secod stanza tho lmfao..but im just slow and u kno that but yah it was a good poem ahah keep it up raibow! lol
*Gill*

You stay strong, life will get better. A great write, enjoyed. You do have a lot of talent and with each poem you write they only get better. lol

Very powerful poem. Full of emotion, sounded straight from the heart. I'm sorry you feel this way, but your poems seem to be a great inspiration to others, I know I certainly enjoyed it.
Well done, head up darlin :)
Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

Hi everyone, and thanx to the people who've voted. Just to let u know, I don't really feel like this, there's times when I go through feelings somewhat similar, but u shouldn't worry, because my life is pretty good:).

Wow this is a seriously awesome poem. You have alot of talent! Keep up the good work.
Take care,
Rachelxx

WOW...this is an remarkable poem...i loved it your use of words is amazing...sorry it took so long to comment but yah know school go go go
anyways great job
take care
Scooby

u have more talent then me i think lol keep up the work <333

that second paragraph was so accurate in my feelings rachele it scared me! another brilliant write that proved to me I must keep an eye on your talent and add you to my faves list - a wonderful upcoming poet!

This poem is real good... I agree with you. and nice work. :)
take care

CyN

well done 5/5 great piece of writting full of depth and emotion. x x x take care x x x

love it! great job, i feel poetry maybe means, or touches your heart in a greater way if you can relate. if u get a chance read some of my latest poems, you may relate or u may find them inspirational.or the oposite lol.
take care,
polly
xxx

That's a great poem, and thanks for commenting on mine. The only thing I would suggest is to limit your comma use, only using it when it would connect two lines that are part of the same bisic sentence. I give it a 5!

Awesome poem...ny only suggestion would be to stick with one rhyme scheme instead of change for no reason.

i loved this poem, u have really talent, keep it up xxx

great poem!! keep it up!! :)

I really really liked this poem..... it means something.... great job.

I love this 1! I love its RHYMIN! They're great! Keep it up! Arrivederci!

wow.. i loved it.. i can really relate to it. i gave it a 5 :)

It's really good, gurl! Very powerful!

another cracker ( please forgive me for using the word cracker) great!!! keep it up xx