Comments : A Candle Story

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    eh wow, that was so beautiful written , defenant 5!! God Bless
    Love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Thank you dear for what u've said,that was really nice of you,and i appreciate it ,n ur the first to comment on my poems..am excited : ) Bless ya too

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I liked the way you made the poem about a candle and it was a good thing. It was a wonderful way to put things. An old philosophy saying was "life is like a flame, flickering at times and too short for the rest"

    The answer to the poem is darkness inside me. Thank you so much for the comments....she cheated on me and i will never go back to her, i am working on this really nice girl i asked her out ot the movies and she accepted. It would be great if it turned into more then just a date...hoping maybe a long term relationship.

    I asked her one thing when we started our realtionship.

    well two

    1) don't cheat on me
    2) if you do tell me..don't hide it.

    She never lived up to either of them.

    Well i have rambled on, i hope that you get as much satisfaction out of this response and it was the one you were looking for.

    ...haha

    P.S. Five/Five on the poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~Nice poem. Candle is a good example, you picked for your poem.
    ~take care, 5! always believe in love, amit ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by crystle

    that is a very interesting poem but i liked it a lot good job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gerard Kurt

    Encouraging and inspirational!
    Beautifully written. Keep on writing!

    Kurt

  • 18 years ago

    by Julie

    WOW, that poem is amazing! Its really great. I love your writing style...That poem is beautiful!
    Love Julie
    XOXOX
    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    Thanks Sweet Juile , am Really thankful that you cared to read this Poem,Nice of you

    Always Take care
    Peace

    Rua Francis

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    This is really, really quite good. I hate the way my poems all end up being rigid to a set form, and often too balanced...yours are much more free.

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    Thanks mates : )

  • 18 years ago

    by sinister

    thanks for your comments. this was sweet. i'm not sure i understand all of it but i can relate to being alone.

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    Hey Sinister,no needs to thank me about commenting ...! : ) Good poems need attention.

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    once again beautiful..5/5 you are really good..i hope you continue to write..

    much love
    shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    Oh Dephe no needs to thank me : )