Butterfly and I

Really sad Rua, the ending kind of caught me off guard, it was all pretty and natural and the *whack* the ending is all sad like. well done (again)

~Lovely, and brings a smile to my face. Good work, Keep writing.
~take care, 5! always believe in love, amit ♥

I really enjoyed this poem. Gave you a 5..short, but sweet and to the point. :) Great job Darla.

nice poem and it has an uplifting beat to it. I enjoyed the way you put it. It was short and too the point.

I like how you used the butterfly to use the metaphore for not wanting to have any burden or anything like that.

Great Job.

Five/Five

thanks ashley... : )