Comments : Do you remember...

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Absolutly amazing beautifully written.. 5.. keep up the amazing work

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Beautiful, emotional. Admittedly, I would have enjoyed reading the full poem as first written. Love never ends, it but changes, and sometimes in wonderful and even more appropriate manners. I had one love who became one of my best friends to this day, and that's probably the best role for the two of us despite how passionately it began.

    Regardless, you make me think of those times and loves left from my own life. Great poem, albeit sad.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    amazing and yet such a beautiful poem that i would enjoy reading over and over again not getting tired of reading the love and experiencing the magic words. personally, i think you should write a novel on the subject. i think it would be a number one seller!

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure


    Typical love poem, except yours is so much better than most of the love poems that are submitted. Your story is descriptive and moving. I liked it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Beautiful. Great use of wording.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    Awww so sweet!and espec like the 'The warm pumpkin spice coffee' Its really visual poem I was practically the fly on your shoulder!!! excellent! xxxLoUxxx