nah its pretty good 4 a school poem haha nah its great excellent work 5/5

Doesn't suck at all, liked the format, and it flowed well, nice poem xxx

It dont suck at all...I thought it was really good...keep up the good work

i really liked this poem, i didnt think it sucked at all, i feel that same sometimes, like im lost or soemthing, newayz good job!!

Sometimes, the unknown bites
With razor sharp teeth
Do I pull my blade of courage
Or keep it in its sheath?
I do not know
And therefore am uncertain
Do I stand and cower,
Or pull back the curtain?

i like this stanza loads..ru kidding?? it's a kewl poem..keep writing!

Don't say that!! It's amazing xxxx

i lvoed how u used repetition it made the poem soudns really good! love your work!

This poem does not suck at all...you are a great writer. Keep it up.

this poem is far from suck. it's very good I especially like the part, "Having no one to run to is worse than having
Something to run from" thats sometimes how I feel. good poem.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

I actually like the poem.To be or not to be?-We all do know that is a question.Original form as well.

It does not suck, I loved it, keep it up...

another wonderful poem robyn. you've truely got a knack for this

-Church

great poem! definately doesn't suck at all i give it 5/5! "Having no one to run to is worse than having Something to run from" i really like that part and can relate to it nice work
xxxChristinaxxx

actually this poem is really good!! it doesnt suck at al!! nicely written keep it up!! :)

It didn't suck, it was good, nicely written. Although the topic is cliche, the poem was still good!

did'nt suck I liked it very much! Would u comment on what just happened and vote. Really would like ur thoughts! or any of them Thanx

This must be my favorite poem by you so far. It was excellent...flawless in everyway. How could you think it sucks?...I love it. it was so emotional that it went straight to my heart. Very interesting read. Take care xxx