Amazing poem, I loved it, very powerful and well written, keep it up :D 5/5

Another great poem it was so sad! I really like ur poems! Keep writing u have talent! Take Care!

this is by far ur best poem so far.

however jsut a few minor adjustments will really maek it better

The all just turn to look at me
Not to help but just to stare

i think it was meant to say 'They all'

also...

''This is day everyone found my secret''

your missing the word .. the

so it will sound better like

This is the day everyone found my secret

apart from that is was a great poem and i enjoyed reading it ..very powerful and full of emotion that can be felt by the reader.

take care

I think this is one of your best...it all fits real well. The language seems a bit more suitable for what you're trying to say. x

thank you hussain. I have done tht now. I am glad you pointed tht out.

This is my fav. poem...very good...sounds alot like sum 1 i kno...(?)_(?)