wow very deep and expressive poem. amazing work!

omg, wow that was truely a great poem, i got goosebumps reading it, its like u can feel the pain by just readin it, that was a really really really great poem, good job!!!!

wow this was an amazeing poem! you told the story of your life in so few words and yet so many it was very deep and kept me mesmerised the whole time it was written really well but it was also sad keep posative and take care! this is an excellent poem! >>5/5<<
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That was great! keep writing please...thank you for all of your comments on my poems they mean a lot to mean take care