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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    that was cute...keep it up!! :) thanks for the comments!!

  • wow very poetic its a beautiful poem and very creative excellent work! 5/5
    bec xXx

  • I loved this poem It was awesome!!!Great job Keep up the excellent work MuchLoveJJ

  • 19 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    thats was a really cute poem, i loved it, ur a really awsome writer, hope to read more of ur work soon

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    Wow. That was brilliant! No critisim that I can offer. It flowed so amazingly. I only hope that some day I will be able to write like this. Amazing!

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    thats SO GOOD! Really well written, great language!!!! Keep writing, 5/5
    luv kt

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    wow, thar was amazingly, ur such a good poet, keep it up xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    i don't understand how its scattered bala, you have to look a little deeper to catch the true meaning...very beautiful!!

    love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by Janie

    it's beautiful.... you have to read it a time or two to understand it fully... but none the less beautiful!

  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    OOooo so cute....i have to talk about this..so neways c ya later

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    It was a little confusing the first time I read it, but the second time made it more clear. It was a very 'deep' and meaningful poem. Nicely done.

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    no honey i'm not in love just wastin my time...

  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

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  • 19 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    wow..this was simply amazing!!!!WOW! You are such a great writer!!!!!! Keep it up! I cant wait to read more!
    Love Always,
    Angel

  • I absolutly love it! Especially this line:

    cinnamon kiss of liquid sun

    I don'w what I like so much about it, I just do! lol Great job and Keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    i loved it! beautiful! a five!

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    luv it. gave it a 5.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ ananya, nice write, beautiful
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    WoW that was realy good you have such a great talent

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    This is a really good poem and has been written really well. 5/5. Love Emma xxx