You found my Scars

by Amanda   Feb 6, 2005


I cut my self to take away the pain,
Scars and memories are all that remain,
I was cutting deeper and deeper as I lied on my bed,
As you walked in my room searching for words to be said,
You looked at the scars on my wrist,
The ones that everyone but you seemed to miss,
You took away my mirrors, razors and knife,
Because you say you love me and your in fear for my life,
You walked out of my room and down the hall,
I shut my door,
And grabbed a tac from my wall,
I sat down on the floor,
Remembering I told you I would cut no more,
I could hear you crying to loud,
That was night I stopped cutting to make you proud.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    love it keep writing youre talented ur one of my favs on this website!

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    Nicely written, your a good writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenn

    so0o0o0 real i like it i know how that feels...5/5 xoxox Bj

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I'm sorry your life was like this but, I'm glad you found a reason to change! 5/5 and stay strong...

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    i like this poem a lot i just recently stppped cutting cuz of my very close friends and its soo hard i still have all the things i used to cut cause it hink it makes me stronger by having them adn not using them but i dunno

    thank you very much for commenting on my poems it means alot to me when people do thanks

    ☼Becky☼