I liked reading your poem. i wrote a poem like yours (sort of) called abuse. And like you it was not from experirnce it was from my cousins experience. Great great poem. i gave it a 5.

i like this poem.i know boys kan be abusive these days.I swear if i was there with you i would have protected you from him,even though i dont know you but every boy/man thats even thinking of hitting a girl/woman is just person that needs to get dealt with.If this is true i should confront him cause i know he did something wrong.im sorry he did that to you and im here for you.:)

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.