That was an amazing poem, one of the best I've read!! Excellent job!!

Kalika

that was the most aweosme heart wrenching story i have ver read. had i the abiltiy to cry i would. i fiished that poem an dunder my breath said 'oh my god'. chich that was awesome. the best thing that i have read on this site, and trust me thats a lot

i luvd it
plz read sum of my poems

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was an amazing poem thanks for sharing with the rest of us out here having hard times too

woah i like it its a sad story but i like it

wow, i loved it...

Aw, this was so brilliant. Never has one poem ever made me feel so emotional as yours did. Simply brilliant.
-A

thats an awesome poem i loved it it was so sweet keep it up

awwww....dats da sweetest poem i've eva heard u r soo talented aii lol keep it up kk 5 outta 5 definately!!!

Its very touching.

you know what that was real good..I love 2 write but i cant write nothing like that if u got anymore poems please tell me cuz i would love 2 read more..I got some poems on here so if u got time please read mine and tell me if there good..i would like your opinion..Keep up the gr8t work

thanx for the comments everyone. I'm glad you guys liked it and all the ppl who told me to read there poems i gladly will. thanx again for the comments.
-amby-

That made me cry as i read it i have to say that is one of the best poems i have ever read.. omg im still crying this is really good i dunno how you came up with it but it is the best i have ever read..