Comments : Death Awaits

  • 19 years ago

    by stephalee

    really good i gave it a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Thank you steph

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    I really like it. your a great writter keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    More than a little disturbing, but I suppose that only makes it all the better considering the message. Very nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Aww this poem's so sad. Great write though hun! >3jess

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    thks you guys...Keep up the great work

  • wow, this poem is really meaning full, i love it, ur a really gd writer, keep it up! lol

    *Michelle*

  • wow, its so sad, but really meaning full! i love the way you always short but great poems, it has all you need to know in it and it doesn't drag on...no offense to ppl who write long poems.

    *Michelle*

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    thanks guys and you Michelle i lov ur poems too

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Haha thank you..----Rachel---

  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hey Rachel!
    Loved the picture it paints, your family grieving for you.
    Great message in the end.
    Loved it!
    xoxo
    Laterz,
    Shirlz

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow i really love this poem, its so sad yet has so much feeling! Well writtin! It's short yet so powerful! Keep it up!! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by PassionatelyMarla

    Hey this is kinda good,, not ur best but keep at it u will get there,, u have a talent that will get better over time,, keep writing girl,, nice job,, lots of lovin,,
    **doz an1c me**
    thx for ur comments :-)