nice write, tammi. good poem, i dont know who gave it '1' rating, the one who did it, must be jealous. keep writing. good rhyme in the poem. :)

take care

This is really good Tammi. I think I like all the poems that I've read from you. Keep up the awesome work ;)

You are a great poet and i am going to read all the poems you write because you have alot of talent and the first person who commented is right the person that gave you a 1 is jelous you have a good sense of how you feel and know how to express it very well in words.

Thanks for the comment. Your poem is great I understand it all to well. Keep it up

Great poem 5/5

TheRealMan

Sorry thx 4 the comment!!!!!

TheRealMan

exellent well done once agen this is extremly good

I like it.. it begins to not rhyme in the end but its really good.. love it! thanx for the comment

-stephany

Awww thats soo nice, you asre a really good person! to be devoted to the one you love, and help her in all the ways

I really like this poem. it's really cute. it flows really good. good job.

Ive never read anything like this...Its so heartfelt, actually braught a tear to my eye, the fact that my friend has scars on her arms tells me theres a story to them..Thanks for your comment by the way

well done!

Aw really nice poem i really liked it.=) It Rocked!!!!!!!

Nice poem tammi...i really liked it...hope u write more of these...^_^

This is.... AMAZING!!!! I can honestly say i started to tear up because of the relation I can feel from this poem. You did a magical job on this putting your feelings down on paper with a simple but captivating flow. You are a very strong poet and have a way to make people feel what you feel. 5/5.