Fate

by Shawnda   Feb 13, 2005


PLEASE COMMENT ON HOW YOU THINK BRUTAL OR NOT I DON"T CARE!

It's all in here
To much for me to bear
I just wanna shout
And let it all out
I always want to cry
But i don't know why
Sometimes I just sit
And think of how I don't "fit"
The guys don't like me
That makes me wanna flee
No one knows what it's like
When nothing feels right
You don't know this world of hate
That seems to be my fate
I sit here and think
How I'm on the brink
Of letting it all out
I'm not gonna shout
That's not what it's about
Instead I'll sit here and stare at the awful reflection in the mirror.

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  • 19 years ago

    by CynicxSincexBirth

    I feel your pain. :sigh: poem hits me on all different levels. nice. very nice.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shawnda

    Thanx everybody.

    LOTS OF LUV
    SHAWNDA(ZACH'S GIRL)

  • 19 years ago

    by FallenxStar

    wow that was really good! im adding you to my favorites!

  • 19 years ago

    by Tammy

    Pretty good. Keep writing. You have good potential.
    Thanks for the comment on my poem! :o)
    God Bless!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    i can tell its a first time poem, fairly well for a first time write...perhaps try thesaurus.com , find a wider variety of words my dear...flee is not a good choice btw but i don't want to discourage you from writing, i believe you have potential! God bless
    love Heather.

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