Is this the first poem you have EVER written...? Seems like it... sorry if im comming on as an a*sshole or anything but this one is kinda lacking the talent... your right, you should cut because most people who do cut, dont think about it, and u have... so ya, keep up the decent work

RATING: 4/5

Oh alright cool... it was good i guess im not into writing poems like that ... apoligizes.. but its good for poeple who enjoy poems like that

i can tell its a first time poem, fairly well for a first time write...perhaps try thesaurus.com , find a wider variety of words my dear...flee is not a good choice btw but i don't want to discourage you from writing, i believe you have potential! God bless
love Heather.

Pretty good. Keep writing. You have good potential.
Thanks for the comment on my poem! :o)
God Bless!!

wow that was really good! im adding you to my favorites!

Thanx everybody.

LOTS OF LUV
SHAWNDA(ZACH'S GIRL)

I feel your pain. :sigh: poem hits me on all different levels. nice. very nice.