Comments : My Heart Bleeds

  • 19 years ago

    by Britt

    good job, good flow, good rhyme sceme...keep it up:)
    take care~
    Love always,
    -Brytne'

  • this poem has great meaning. I can relate to it. This is wonderful. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by James

    This poem has a great meaning. and I can relate to it. its beautiful :) 5/5 keep writing plz thanks for ur comment on mine :)

  • 18 years ago

    by creasy

    lovely poem!! flowed great!! keep it coming!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    I love this poem =) very good! I voted a 5.. please check out my poem "eternal sunshine of the spotless mind" please comment and rate.. thanks a lot, hugs

  • 18 years ago

    by Reddo Tori

    Good poem!! I liked it very much!! You've captured the emotion in your words quite well ^^.
    -Redd

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Well I read it and it was done qute well it flowed real nice but the ending was off I feel you did not follow it up with the same rythem. All and all it held well told a story and you could picture it even though it was made from a surrendering stand point check out you want this by me I think you would like it it is really the flip side of this piece. Also check out Hold Me. this was good for starters

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Another great poem! It was deep and so well written! U are a great writer! Check out some of mine if u would I have a couple new ones! Thanx! Brooke

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Great and touching poem, very sad though!!! Nice flow ..... Loved it!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    I liked the way you portaid the pain iun this real good. But I never really liked taking the position of a victem. We all get hurt but to just wrap up in a ball and just die is just senceless. At least to me. But then again I am older... I hope you see the worth in fighting not dieing. It's easy to give up its harder to live...

  • 18 years ago

    by Ria

    Nice ending.It's a very good poem, for the subject it wants to represent. Just this, is weird:My soul barely bigger than a crumb.Maybe you could try something else there.All in all, it's a nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    What can I say? It was really a great poem. It was written well and it flows very well. True emotion shows!!=) Great work!!!=) 5/5

    Can u plz comment on my poem "My Story" thanks!!!=)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kymberly

    Awsome poem! Good flow and comparison!

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hmm, already commented on this one...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I liked this a lot another 5/5 your rhyming was almost all exact, me and bleed don't rhyme but i guess thats okay, i loved your vocab in this one awesome

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Awsome poem. it was so deep and it really touched me. very well written.i loved your use of words and the rhyming. 5/5 keep up the good work.