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  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    Well great work!!! although short it is very well writen. Ill give u a 5! =) could you plz cheeck mine also my new poem titled My Story thanks!!!! =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amberlee

    Good poem, people always try to tell us that everythings gonna be okay, but how do they know. Their not us. Right.

  • very strong and emotional poem. You got your point across nicely. Great job! Keep it up!

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    ps, if you ever want me to read you poems, just leave a comment for me to and I gladly will.

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    Good job, nice feeling.

  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    gr8 poem xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    i really dug the rhythmn of this one . it just grabbed me

  • 18 years ago

    by Frankie

    This is how I feel about anyone who tries to console me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    great poem and has rythem and i can relate.

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    This was alittle bit better but the real question here is why are you not ok? you got the effect down pat but the cause is real hazy...

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    very good.. great I voted a 5!! keep it up.. hugs

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    THIS IS GREAT>>> The emotion is jam packed...adding u to fav

  • 18 years ago

    by -Erin-


    I like this one,it has alot of emotion..great work ^,^
    I'd love to see from you so i shall add you to my favorites.

    Keep on writing and allways believe.
    </3 Erin

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    nice emotions

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    wow! ok, so i normally don't like this kind of set-up for a poem, but this one really worked. it had a clear idea of where you were going and it flowed very well!! AWESOME JOB! you made me like something that i normally don't like! (example.. it's like.. if you made me like brocoli.. yea.. stupid.. never mind! lol) great job, again!
    peace,
    Abcede ^,^

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Ah, well this is a little better. I saw more emotion. Keep adding your feelings and go into more depth. Nice job. Keep writing, you can only get better.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    A very angry poem, not much structure, but alot alot of emotion.. very well written, I can feel how mad you are, Good Job.