This poem is okay Iguess, try to make it a little bit longer so you can express your thoughts a little better. Great rhyming though, 4/5.

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Good poem. You really put your emotions into it, and it's also easy to relate to, even if the reader doesn't cut. Nice work! If you have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!:)

thanx i have rated some!!!
if you read this plrease read you saved me i know its long but it is my story! thanx

hey caris that was great!!

great poem!!

that's a really good poem... and a lot of ppl have that temption i do for one... great job

great poem

Great poem, well expressed and written with some strong feeilings within.

5/5