Comments : Your Ring

  • 12 years ago

    by JJ

    couldn't quite understand it..but the concept looked good.

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    wow,
    im so sorry your best friend ended her life cause she thought her dreams would never pull through, theres tough feelings in that poem and it made me cry, keep up the good work i gave u a 5/5! email me if you want

    love,
    angel

  • 12 years ago

    by Broken Hearted Immortal

    i love it it makes me want to cry a little bit but its awesome. keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Fireflower

    aw... that poem was so sad.... but the ending kinda threw me off there.. did it mean that their spirit was still with you, or were they physicaly there? great pome nontheless!! keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by shannon

    haha her spirit was still there i meant

  • 12 years ago

    by oOXkonnXOo

    wow that is i great poem! its so sad! keep up the awesome work!!

    -jenn

  • 12 years ago

    by The Secret Keeper

    wow. why would you think you aren't a good writer!

  • 12 years ago

    by Elyssa

    Oh no.. this happend to me too.... it really sucks.. i feel your pain :(

  • Awww... that was so sad, but a great poem nevertheless. Keep your head up high and take care!

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  • 12 years ago

    by happy days

    im so sorry bout your best friend, i think shed have been so proud to read this, keep it up u hav so much talent xx

  • 12 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    wow i thought that was a really good poem, and im so sorry for your friend. but i thought the poem was excellent

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    Great, 5, really sad, take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Valerie

    I loved this. I put you on my favorites. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    wonderful poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by Heathergirl

    YOU REALY HAVE A GREAT WAY OF EXPRESSING YOURSELF...5/5
    MUCH LOVE
    ~*~HEATHER~*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    hehe, i've read and commented on this one too....this poem is really good though!

  • 12 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    sad sad poem...but so so good...Sherrie

  • 12 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    like it. actually love it. keep it up. you have what it takes~!!!~

    thanks for reading my poems. it means a lot to me. thanks again~!!~

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    it was a pretty good poem, the letter added a nice touch

  • 12 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    What can I say? Another good and very original poem. I liked the way the poem doens't go on and on how you felt it describes the "setting"more if you know what i mean. Very beautiful, keep on writing. take care.
    SatuzKa