Comments : Dont fade away ( please )

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    nice write. keep writing, some good use of rhyme there, and very beautiful words used!

    take care, 5! always believe in love

    dont forget to vote for my poem 50 reasons why i love you!

    ♥ amit ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Beautifully written....Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    A beautiful and emotional poem. Worded beautiful and well written. Take Care. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Beautiful poem...i like your style of writing...take care and keep smiling

  • 19 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    wonderful write. it was so real, and it was very nicely done. ciao~lyn

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very nice, indeed! Congrats on winning the contest!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

    That was beautiful!! I LOVED IT!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Stef

    Amazing. Brilliant. Superb. Fantastic.
    But you already knew that =)
    -Stef

  • 19 years ago

    by Christy Carpenter

    The first stanza is amazing...the second doesn't really make sense, esp. the second line. I love the overall meaning, and the overall quality. May want to think about rewording. But, its pretty!

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    thanks for all your comments . i promise to get to read all your entries as soon as i can

    many thanks and everyone keep writing there is some real talent on this site ..

  • 19 years ago

    by --JeNnIfEr--

    That is an awesome poem. I really like that. Keep up the great work!

    x0-Twinkle-0x

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Christine

    I love this poem Paul, really an amazing job!

  • 19 years ago

    by dezie

    this poem is soo pretty

  • 19 years ago

    by sinister

    this was very touching. i enjoyed. great poem

  • 19 years ago

    by chavii

    very touching.

    --chavii--

  • 19 years ago

    by littleone14

    that's a tight poem maybe you can teach me to get that deep in my soal and say what i really feel

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholle

    great 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    i loved ur poem and it fits in with me and all so yeah keep up the good work peace

  • 18 years ago

    by sally

    that was just awsome, I can't explain how much i had a connection to this poem!

    sally

  • 18 years ago

    by IxXDestinyXxI

    This poem is very amazing and understanding. Please write more like this, Thank-you for sharing this with me!!!