this was really good i really liked it keep it up
~rock on~

the title is not strange, it was well thought out....and the poem followed through well, greatly written!-5
love Heather.

lol, i happened to like the title. Its partly what triggered my interest into reading it. lol. I though it was going to be a humorous poem, lol. but I see it isn't. It's a nice, sad one that really touched me. I loved it, babe. Great one!!

~Sierra

wow....wonderfully written....I enjoyed this poem very much....please, if you could, read my poem "angel of mine" and tell me what you think? Your opinion on that certain poem would be very appreciated.

I think u did an excellent job..this poem is very sad, but I like how it was a very different topic..unique ya know..great poem

Unloved ♥

I really enjoyed reading this because it started off one way and transformed the ending into something different to what you thinks going to end. Excellent

Great poem, i loved it, your images get your point across beutifuly!

thats really heavy stuff for one so young. keep up your great writing talent.