Comments : My Story

  • 19 years ago

    by Janice Brown~©~

    I love how you wrote "he's not gonna end his life, he's gonna wait for her" i love that part.. it made me feel hope for you and this special girl..
    luv always janice xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by latin girl

    beautiful poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    This is a beautiful poem. So heartfelt. Keep up the good work and thanks for the comment

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Very good. I loved how you wrote it and basically just put the entire poem together. It flowed so well and had such an awesome meaning behind it. Thank you for the comment. =) Take care and keep writing!

    God bless you! <3

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Beautiful! Great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by silentscream

    you have alot of talent
    well put together
    thnax for commenting on mine
    i really liked this poem!!
    love
    caris

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Great poem! So well written... I look forward to reading more of your stuff..You are soo talented..
    Keep it up!

    Rebecca.

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    wow, that was soo unbelievably good. it was written really well and the ending made me sigh in awe. that was really beautiful, thanks for your comment, and keep it up ;) xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    Thank you so much everyone!!! I really appreciate it.=)

  • 19 years ago

    by Jo

    This is a realy good and deep poem keep up the good work and thankyou for commenting on my poems!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Essence of Blight

    Ouuu I love it! A definite 5!!! I used tah live in da Philippines heh. Anyways keep it up! I really love it! Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by Conner

    Good but it can be revised. It's an awesome poem but the grammatical errors really bring it down. Honest "4". Keep up the good work though. Just take your time and you'll be fine. Take care!
    -Conner

  • 19 years ago

    by Ben

    Good poem mate
    ben

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    very nice poem..i liked it alot. i gave it a 5.keep on writting:).

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken Hearted Immortal

    really really touching i love it. keep up the good work.

    ~catherine~

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    The grammatical errors bring the poem down a lot. I liked it to an extent, but it didn't have very much flow. All in all, it was an alright poem, just needs some work. Just keep writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Valerie

    Good stuff. I liked it. It was very heartfelt.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shy

    this is... um...theres no words
    it is really (100 times over)great
    thnx 4 commenting on mine
    i've read some of your others there
    really good 2 so now ur on my Fave list

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    wow, i loved reading this poem, it was really good, if u get chance can u check out mine thanks, keep up the ace work xxx

  • I reall liked this poem! Very nice job on it, the effort shows. 5/5 definatly. Keep it up!

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