Comments : The innocence of a Child

  • 19 years ago

    by R F


    oh..ur pome is the sweet gift sent from you , :) lol,its soo nice,n the word sweet fits in !

    i loved this part:
    Something sweet and not wild
    Sent from the skies up above
    In the innocence of a child.

    its really amazing,n i felt like i wanted to express that thing oneday but u did it instead of me : )

    great.

    Peace,
    Darla

  • 19 years ago

    by R F



    So Excellent Excellent and Excellent !
    why dont u check some of my poems ? u might like them mate,ok? n tell me what u think : )

    give ya 5/5

    take care

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. thhis poem is really cute.. i like it a lot.. except for the ending.. i feel like your threw in the word wild just to rhyme with child besides that one line though i really like this poem!