Comments : A Dream

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    That's so sweet!! very good poem, Keep it up!!

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by Essence of Blight

    Very touching! With passion indeed! I love it! 5/5 Keep it up! Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by Elyssa

    So touching.... it had great flow!!!!!! keep up the great writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    OMG - AWESOME JOb, i love it ! it was so moving and touching .. lol.. excelent work, i couldnt have done it better myself , lol .. but also thanks so much for your comments on my poems, they meant a lot and i would love for you to look at some of my other work .. ! keep up ur amazing work !

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    great poem, loved the way it flowed, keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken Hearted Immortal

    very very good

  • I'm ususally not one for love poems, but his one, along with your others, was awesome. keep writing,

    -Michelle

  • 19 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    wow one word!
    ~*-BeAuTiFuL-*~
    I believe you might be the next shakespear! or however you spell his name!
    Keep up the amazing work, I would rate that a 10! but 5 is hte highest so.
    ~Lia Jnell~

  • 19 years ago

    by Lisa

    A love poem.. how sweet with the pink surrounding it and everything... did you write this about the time of Valentines Day? lol...

    *yea, I've been heartbroken many times, I tend to fall easily... but a good thing comes out of each heartbreak.. a good poem. :/*

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Love it:):)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mel

    So...eloquent. the word choice was great, and i loved the ending!

  • 13 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    You should have said it!!!! lol....Very sweet!!! God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-