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  • 12 years ago

    by AJ

    hey, good job. I like it. keep it up. 5/5

    ~no more

  • 12 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    this is a terrific poem! wow~ you definitely have some real talent! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jordan

    this poem is...wow. There is SOOO much emotion it makes you feel over whelmed, you know? Well good poem. Thank you so much for commenting on my poem.

    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

  • 12 years ago

    by JLT

    Dude this is like the BEST poem ever.. I wish i could write this good.. Anyways good work.. 5/5 Love ya! *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 12 years ago

    by abcede

    again.. the ending.. wow! great job! i really love your poems.. they make me sad, though.. because they're so depressing!! lol.. i hope ur ok!!!lol.. i'm still readin ur poems!! luv um!

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    stunning...absolutely stunning
    ~Freak~

  • 12 years ago

    by happy days

    i love ur poems, they are so well written and this poem is no exception. keep up the amazing work and i look forward to reading more! xxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Emily

    Ooooo I especially like the 5th stanza. 5/5, Keep writing!
    ~Emmy

  • 12 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Wow.....Awesome...I'm completely in awe. This is a brilliant write...no wonder it's got such perfect ratings <3333 Well done ^_^ I love it. xxxxx <33 I can't wait to read your future work, everything i've read by you is so amazing...I'll have to read more of your past work too =) <3 Tis swell, all of it ^_^ xxxxx love you hun xxx Take care..I hope you're alright :) xxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

    ps. I'm always here for you xxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Laloser05

    Luved it. understood it, and could relate....

  • 12 years ago

    by BROKen2PEIces

    very good.5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Fantastic poem! i can relate! u have such powerful words in this poem! keep it up! LUVZ IT! xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    you have great writing skills. keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Shy

    Your a wonderful poet keep it up :)

  • 12 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    omg great job...very touching and sad....love it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by NICOLE

    hi you are really good and if you need any help i'm here for you

  • 12 years ago

    by Rad

    I love your poems..

    *monkey*

  • OMG HUNI I LOVED IT! im so sorry u feel so much pain but it will all get better, im always here 4 y0o!! just a email away!! um plz check out my poems, i value ur opininon! thanks hun mwah

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Great poem! I understand your thinking and how you feel about life. I feel the same way too

  • GReaT!!.. ^^, *wipEs oF TeaR*..
    gOOd JoB.. KeeP uP!.. ^^,