Really good, really good , keep up the great work .

Good poem

5/5 this is really good, i love it! its very well written 5/5 keep up the good work. i can relate to this one, as i imagine you can seeing as youve written it. but anyway, good job =]

I loved this poem. i can relate to it really well. keep it up!

There's no such thing
as help outside of your mind,
It's you against yourself,

awwwwwwwwwww. it was sad. i loved your poem

This is....Amazing. You have such talent. This is honestly one of the, not only best, but also well put together poems I have ever read. Please keep up the good work I will look forward to reading more of your work.
Izzy

You have talent. your poem was very well written, and has alot of emotion. keep up the excellent work

Wow this is so sad and heart breaking...you just gave up...just simply beautiful!! 5/5

Hey I loved this it was awesome great job

5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*

So touching capturing inner thoughts of an emotion experienced

WOW.
That's all I can say.
Everything fit so wonderfully,
and the rhyme scheme was fantastic.
You are beyond talented,
and you know how to capture a reader's attention.
Keep up the amazing work,
I cannot wait to read more of your stuff.
Stay Cool.
Meg
XD

Such a beautiful poem Rolo! I could feel the emotions dripping from your poem.. so sad. You are an awesome writer, keep the great work up! 5/5 <3

~Loveless Nights~

Magnificant

That is a great poem..keep ritin and never stop...
xXScarred4lyfeXx

I loved this poem. Its really good..

OMG DAT POEM IS MADD GOOD...I LOVE IT ND I SAY DA SAME THING MAN DATZ GOOD KEEP DOIN WUT U DO

That was soooooo good I can't rilly decide wat i liked best about it. me and alot of my friends could definitly relate so it seems more realistic putting more dementions to it and makes it more emotional!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:]

You are amazing, you have great talent...keep it up
-Desi

I love this...its really touching, really deep. i liked it alot... 5/5

Wow! You are an amazing writer and if you ever need help with anything I am here.