That was really good. Nice job! (",)

~Krissy

i think so many people in life can relate to this poem at least once if not more in thier life! great job, keep it up!! and thanks for your comments! as long as you comment on mine i will come back and comment on your! PLP and Take care!

~lil slam~

great job, Carmen- i loved this poem- especially the last stanza

nice job. very well writen.

I liked this poem a lot! i think its your best, also very well written

I liked this one. you need to try an ( A ) in the last verse. (Give me A chance to glision.) It will make it flow better.

Great poem, i really liked it although at the begiing i found the flow a bit choppy and near the end it flowed beautifully.... still gave it a 5 though:)

wonderful poem. keep it up. 5/5

strong, powerful words with a very strong meaning loved every line and i can also partly relate...... great work! >>5/5<<
bec

hmm.. very nice.. i liked it..
the rhymes were.. alright..
kinda seemed forced though. but overall a good poem

Good poem. The rhymes sounded forced. But overall, it was very nice.

-Ice

i love your poems. their so meaningful and emotional!!!! your an excellent writer. keep up the great work

You are a very good writer but i think you could have done a little better with this one

Much talent! very good

Not bad, not bad, but some of the rymes need work, try rewriting a few lines here and there. 4/5

Excellent! I like the choice of topic M'Dear.

"Please just listen,
Give my chance to glisten.
Let me show you what's inside,
Let me come out, so I no longer have to hide."

I especially like this stanza. =)

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

5/5 Beautiful
It was well put together and yet another great poem! Nice work, and please look at mine too ;)
Love
Niki

This poem says exactly how I feel, it's a great one, keep writing.

Good poem super choppy....5/5 though cause i like the idea and i think it's a really good poem