Great job. That was really something it is well written and flows very well. I know how it feels =( Still great work!!! 5/5

Can u plz check my new poem also its titled is "My Story" thanks!!!

Great poem hun. A lot of feeling and emotions.
Check out some of mine. I would really appreciate a comment on my newest one Take It All Away.
Thank you! :)

Love,
Tiff

that was really good!! keep it up!! :)

thats really good i could really relate to the way you are feelin.
keep up the good work u have tallent!!
lil kit xxx
please read/comment mine

cool poem'd. good flow to it

omGg dat was REalli good mWaZzz hope 2 here more.. pls chek out mine 2 mwAzz