That was a very touching poem! After reading the first line i could tell you have talent!
God bless,
~Sonja

so beautiful

This is really good i really like it you have great talent

Wow, extremely touching...loved the flow and content, you are doing extremely well! Thanks for the comment..it meant a lot!

Beautifully written! Very touching indeed! Great job~Holly

Awsome job! very touching. keep writing! and thanks alot for rating mine!
Always faithful,
erica*

I already commented on this poem, but i think ill comment on it again. That was totally beautiful. You must have gone through a lot of pain, and i hope everythings okay now. Atleast she is in heaven:) Please check out my poem Footprints in the Sand if you the time, thanx
SatuzKa

This is a beautiful and emotional poem. I am really sorry to hear about your mum and I am hear if you need anyone to tak too. Good Job! 5/5. Love Emma xxx

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Sorry. Love Emma xxx

Wow I really loved this poem. It was so beautiful I feel so sad when I read it I know the pain. I have one called Christmas in Heaven if u want to check it out and let me know what u think Thanx!

awww so sad and sweet. its a wonderful poem and im sure ur mother really appreciates it! brilliant
xxxLoUxxx

your poem is very well written, and I do know your pain, I lost my mom to cancer as well. I've learned that God is in Control. and he does not make mistakes, he makes us stronger, I know your mom is whispering little thoughts into the big man upstairs ears, and you now have an angel that will always be with you....Great poem, please read mine, and let me know what you think Thanks Love Becky

Lovely poem about your mother, it's so perfect too...Sorry to hear that she has cancer, hope that you are ok??? You have so much talent, I love your poems.

Wonderfuly well written, sad, and deep. Love it!

Beautifully written! This is my favorite yet. I love how you calmed down such a sad event....but did it in a way as to not take away from HER. Your words flowed so perfectly and sent across your message which you probably needed within yourself....Very strong! Absolutely perfect!! Take Care and God Bless! :) 5/5

truly touching...sorry about your mother....good thing you have your faith still to help get you through...well done doing it from her point of view.

xxx

Absolutely heart wrenching in the most beautiful way. It was such a peaceful write, peaceful yet sad. Amazing job, I loved it. 5/5.