short but very nice :) liked it ... hope u pass by mine >:D< much love

wonderful poem!

has a lot of meaning to it and i like it keep up the good work :)

hey since you have no name i though i would maybe help, "Sun with no Moon" just an idea you don't have to change it if you don't want cause it's your poem, and hey welcome to the site:) PLP (peace love power)

~lil slam~

that was from the heart again i can tell.your stuff seem to have heart felt meaning to all of it,if itss true,stick in ,smiles will replace frowns,then u ll look back and think,blue told me id be happy again smile again lol.trust me been there,won the shirt worn the cap.its life.1 day u`ll find some1 that does love ya true,keep ya head up, blue, oh 5/5

I can't say anything negative about any of ur poems there all great!!

this was pretty good, keep writing!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

hey hey ur an indian?? woah kool one more indian poet namaste madame amd this is an interesting poem...but i would have liked it to be longer,

Short, but sweet. Says a lot in just a few lines. Good work!

that was a good poem. it was simple but true and i like it that way.
~SatuzKa

well done ... true love as the sun needs the moon the moon needs the sun ... 4/5

Very good poem... =)
I gave you a 5 for this one..
Take Care Nida.
/September Spring

Very sad, but honest and sincere. I like it, nice work!

I like the halting sort of style... good job once again!

I liked this one the most out of all yours that I've read. The line breaks are positioned effectively, and it's quite simple, but heartfelt.

I really like the "sun with no moon" phrase, great poem

A very meaningful and strong poem. I liked this one a lot. Keep up the good work.