Before I Had a Friend

by Carmen   Feb 22, 2005


Before I had a friend,
I had no life.
My companion was my sharp little knife.
I'd ease myself and cut,
Leaving my soul feeling like a mutt.
At night I'd cry,
During the day I just sit and sigh.
My parents would fight,
And I would cringe at the sight,
For they fought because of me,
And that I could clearly see.
My mom was a drunk,
Her heart had already sunk.
My dad hated us,
He'd yell and scream and cuss.
Nobody would listen,
But surprisingly my hope still glistened.
I sat and waited,
And found someone I haven't hated.
I found you,
And you found me, too.
You gave me hope,
So I no longer mope,
I no longer sigh,
I no longer cry,
I no longer moan,
I'm no longer alone.
You wiped away my tears,
You took away my fears.
You taught me to love,
And now I'm as free as a dove.
I love you,
And I know you love me, too.

~Dedicated to my friend. She told me how she felt before meeting me, and I made it into a poem for her. Please rate and comment. Thanks!~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse Ray

    Powerful poem. Made your point crystal clear. And also I loved the way you canceled the actions from the first half of the poem with:

    "So I no longer mope,
    I no longer sigh,
    I no longer cry,
    I no longer moan,
    I'm no longer alone."

    And still made it rhyme. Once again, very powerful.

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    Another excellent poem!
    your friend must be lucky to have someone who cares about her that much! :D
    well done
    ~*MaRy*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    This is my favorite poem that i have read of yours so far.. it was very sweet of you to do that for your friend and im glad see met such a good friend like you great job 10/5 lol xox take care x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    Yeah, friends are the best...I enoyed your poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is cool because you put yourself in somebodies shoes and wrote a really emotional piece about it. great job the flow wasn't bad..good job