Comments : Broken Hearts and Scattered Tears

  • 19 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    that poems really good, i like it it's sad but its good..i hope you feel better

    Christina

  • 19 years ago

    by Dead As Yesterday

    Very touching It pulled at my heart strings 5/5
    Dave......

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ nice write, this one too. good job, enjoyed
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    the ending was perfect, you need NO CHANGES hun, absolute perfection!-5

    love ya and BIG HUGS
    -Heather M Craig

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    This is really good... really true... dont we all wish we could have our own way...Love Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by Keith

    Good Job Gurl! <3 Your writin! Keep it up! 100/5 ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by miiss lala

    i thought that was just so cute! great job! <333

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael Reyes

    heylove the poem... i think its good as it is though... like everyoone said.. the flows great... and yeah

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Beautifully written as always Holly, I love your work. Love, Tim