great poem! but you have to realize not all woman lie and are like that one girl. what she did was mean...but there is definitely someone waiting for you...so i wouldnt give up just yet...

it's not a relationship...and you are both right, not all women are like that...but only the ones that i meet are.

Don't worry things will get better. And I read your poems.

not all gurlz are like dat she'z a b@#$% i hope she goes to hell 4 making u feel that bad any ways great poem

gj luved it 5/5

i know how horrible you must feel for i've dealt it as many have. As its already been stated not all will do you like that and i hope you find a woman who treats you better b/c u deserve it, ur a very talented, beautiful person and God bless ur heart. i love reading your poems, i love knowing about you , and thru u i see no wrongs and always remember the pain makes u stronger! be thankful! and btw, i give a damn bout the poem hun lol, its awesome -5

love you
love Heather

Hey, this is good...that sux that she did that to you...you deserve a lot more than that...keep ur head up and definetely keep writing!!! take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

dude, i gave a damn!!! i loved it , and i'm sorry about my fellow female treatin you that way, but there are more gals in the sea. you didn't deserve that, and higher you're standards!!!

byes and laters,
brandy

That was very goOd.. ur words just caught me........

i read it, and i thought it was good. not all girls are like that, some care. i hope u feel better...and one day you will find your match, just give it time. i have been told that by a few guys...about 3 or 4, maybe 5. yeah it hurts, but theres a quote that keeps me going..."The one who makes you cry isn't worth your tears. The one who is worth your tears would never make you cry." remeber that no matter what happens, you are better then they.

~*~oh wow, good poem, dont give up though, there is a gurl out there for you, men DO have feelings, ur right, and sometimes gurls, especially stuck up ones tend to think that the effing universe revolves around them and they have no care in the world for anyone else....they get hurt when guys do this shit to them , but think nuttin of it when they do it to them..well keep ur head up hun,
jenna~*~

As a girl i have never had that happen to me. But i hope whoever did that to you feels bad and makes it up to you some day. Great poem, i really liked it

i luv this poem its v good, but not all girls are like that there is someone out there for you you just need to find her! higher your standards if necesary!
luv han xx

that was really good, and about this girl, forget her, u deserve a really sweet caring girl

hey hun, jus wanted to let you know i did email you back. check it! i love ya!

Love Heather.

Hay I like the poem... It shows the real side of who you are and that women aren't the only ones that have feelins and sometimes its good to know that men have the same as us to... Keep up the poems!

thanx for the comment on mine also, but you poems are really good, and you can never be too nice, that's a great characteristic in guys tha us girls look for! keep it up, and keep writing your feelings!!!

byes and laters,
brandy

i like this poem a lot, i'm really sorry that happend to you, there are 100 of girls who would love to be with someone like you all i have to say is screw her. great poem.
~!~Noelle~!~

i agree about that not all girls are like that and no i do not feel sorry for u i feel happy for u...cuz u can learn from all of this u are better than what u think u are....and if u do kill your self then u are the loser...u lost at life and u lost against her...u shouldnt cry cuz that would make her gain more power...be happy make her jelious of u that she has to beg for forgivness...

anywayz i dont care anymore u can email me if ya want to

no, i won't kill myself, i know that not all women are like that. I know that..but those were my feelings at the time, i maybe had 2 good relationships out of ....god knows. One of them for two years of my life, she cheated on me for six months out of it...and now is engaged to the man whom she cheated with. Everyother one...all i asked of them were two things.

1) They be truthful even if it hurts me..and be themselfs
2) That if i am being a jerk you have the right to slap me as hard as you can..and i will not be mad at all...and too keep their mind open.

I know it isn't much...but everyone who has responded to this poem, i will look at yours and comment on them...you have no idea how touching it is to have someone actually care about what i write and what i am doing. It is truely something that means a lot to me.

Thank you all for your comments.

Signed,
Dark Savior Aka Shaun