Comments : A Second Chance?

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wonderful poem!! i really like it! hehe, its kinda funnie cuz i just wrote a poem called second chance...but this is really good! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by !*!Zoe!*!

    Oh....I like this poem, but I would put it in the Poems about Life in the inspirational category. Anyway, it was a great poem.

    xoxZoexox

  • 19 years ago

    by elise

    Awsome poem. I really think that it was quite touching.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kiersten Nicole

    omg! this poem rocks soo hard. i love it!!! gosh! great job!!!
    -K

  • Loved It xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    and place the knife against me throat ...me should be my... but other than that one mistake this poem is great...xox Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by Shawn

    nice change of events at the end.. a poem i can relate to... somewhat, cool poem'd

  • 19 years ago

    by Marianne

    Loved It!!:) I loved the happy ending!:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amber

    Wow, this poem gave me chills, and almost brought tears to my eyes, because not only do i understand whut your are writting about, i also have felt the same way you have, and expreined it to. Very good job, i loved it.

  • 19 years ago

    by shenoa

    i love the ending... continuing to love me, even without the mask... i love it.. i love that line... great job... 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    Wow... that was a great poem, keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Chantley

    You know, I thought I had a friend like that. But I lost her to a guy. So I guess if I did the same thing. I probably would've died. :(

  • 19 years ago

    by Jess

    great job i loved it keep it up!!

    check out my poems if your interested, id like to kno what you think of them! :o)

    ..xO Jessie

  • 19 years ago

    by lost soul

    that was really good and sad!

  • 19 years ago

    by Joann

    omfg!!! i loved this!! i wish this would happen to me!! man but anyways this was nicely written!! 5/5 ♥ Joann

  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    very good poem! I loved it! If only we all could have a second chance. Vote and comment on some of my stuff if you ever get the chance.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    this type of story has been around for a long time but i just wrote my version of it, especially since there are many versions i figured why not