Comments : ShAmE To LeAvE Him Da CrOwn

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    this poem is really good. wonderful poem. i luv it.

  • 18 years ago

    by natalie

    i like this poem, especially for its honesty xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    Good message and everything. From what I read on your other poems it sounds like you are going for a certain type of sound in your writing. I don't think that is bad, but I think you should try some other stuff too. Just so that you can experiment. Other than that I liked the line about the crown.