Comments : FaMe In Da GamE

  • 12 years ago

    by creasy

    that was cute and good..lol.. keep it up!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Good Job keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    haha thats kinda funny...poor guys lol. i like it though >5<
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    wonderful poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey i like this poem - so full of great thoughts. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    I like it! Flows very well! Your a good writer!
    Love always,
    Haily
    xoxoxoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by David Paul

    I'm not a real big fan of rap but I like to see if I can make beats to some poems and turn them into rap style readings. idk. lol. That's what I like about your stuff. It all has such a good beat to it so far. keep it up. kilman 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    That was very good, It had a nice rhythm to it

  • 11 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Haha very cute! made me laugh. good job

  • 11 years ago

    by oldthings

    Very good poem, it has great rythm to it. very wonderful =) 5/5

    APoeticSoul