Comments : Run

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Another good one short but said what u had to say!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Short but very good =) 5/5!
    Keep it up.. Please check out my poems: "My Dad: Dead And Gone Forever" and "The Final Cut For Marc" Would mean a lot to me. Take Care. Hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by Vicious Tragedy â„¢

    Short and to the point... I like it keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    hey nice poem........be strong..and have beliief in urself.....u can overcome all burdans that have been put on ur shoulders...so take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Misstress

    Short and Cute.
    I really like poems that are short.
    It keeps me hanging at the end.
    ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    Deep in a wierd emo way but i loved it ...A lot....
    Great work

    Xox Sherrie

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    the poem seems to have a charming candidness

  • 18 years ago

    by *Guerita*

    I like it even though it is short more like a quote but it is good
    _lady Jaz 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Frankie

    Short and powerful! Just the way I like them!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    short pwaerful GREAT! lol keep writing

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    dont run anymore, push forward, it's better. good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    you must get tired alot so tell me why do you run thats what i want to hear...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    good poem loved it!!
    keep up the work

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    Oh boy do I wish it was just that easy....
    Great work hun...

  • 18 years ago

    by lilhippyangel

    Short and Sweet....I like it....you could add more though

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    very short n sweet. easy to understand
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    pretty good, even though its very short

  • 18 years ago

    by otto

    Great poem, really like the flow but the conculsion, maybe it could of been more to it, good overall though

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    very insightful poem. makes me remember how I used to feel when I was your age. I've really been enjoying your poems...

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Expand more! Tell me why you want to run. Put more emotion into this! Pour your heart out..I know you have it in you.