ooh, i like it!!

wow, i really like that last line... but, my favorate line of the whole thing...
"Take this bleeding heart of mine,
Rip its roots and rip its core,
Take from the darkness inside,
The feelings that leave me wanting more,"
-"the feelings that leave me wanting more..."
amazing... great job 5/5

Another fantastic poem! Real touch of darkness in there! Great job xxxx