Thunder

by Amanda   Feb 28, 2005


Stop my crying,
Stop this pain,
Stop this thunder,
Stop this rain,

Take away these thoughts,
Give my back my soul,
Take away this thunder,
So I can be whole,

Listen to my crying,
Listen to my screams,
Listen to this thunder,
Thats haunts me in my dreams,

I'm caged from my nightmares,
I'm caged from my words,
I'm caged from this thunder,
For all my cry\'s that go unheard,

I need for you to hear this crying,
I need for you to see my pain,
I need for you to stop this thunder,
For my hearts the one with all this rain.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    wow that was really good! awesome job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by tea lady

    5/5 great stuff keep up da good work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenn

    i like this poem very much 5/5 and i would like to tell you i love all your poems keep it up....xoxox BJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    the only thing I'd change is put a that in "So I can be whole," so it read "So that I can be whole," it might flow a little better! Great poem...not going to argue with the rest 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    WOW!!! that was awesome....wow lol good job

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