This was really nicley written. Usually cutting and depression bore me and I stop reading them in the middle, but you held my attention the entire time. Really nice job! If you ever need someone to talk to pm me or email me @ firstname.lastname@example.org. You are a really talented writer, keep up the good work
oh my god girl... that was incredable... i had in my head while i was reading, how much i can relate... and my favorate part was what each cut was for... up untill you stated... "i did this all, to get back at you..." wow girl, i did a double read... i dont often read poems twice, esspesually long ass ones like thiss... but, i read this not once, not twice, but three times... i love this poem. you are a brilliant writter... your comments mean so much to me... and i hope vis versa... anyways... i WOULD give it a ten.. but i guess... a five will surfise...
"These marks on my body,From eternityâ€™s undying resent,This inscription on my skin,From my pain and torment"
I think this is my favorite line in this poem. Great choice of words.
I really liked the description for each cut, wonderful flow.
The true emotion and torment in this piece is fantastic. You did a great job expressing inner hated. 5/5