Comments : Permanent Marks

  • 12 years ago

    by Leah20

    This was really nicley written. Usually cutting and depression bore me and I stop reading them in the middle, but you held my attention the entire time. Really nice job! If you ever need someone to talk to pm me or email me @ penguingirl007@yahoo.com. You are a really talented writer, keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by shenoa

    oh my god girl... that was incredable... i had in my head while i was reading, how much i can relate... and my favorate part was what each cut was for... up untill you stated... "i did this all, to get back at you..." wow girl, i did a double read... i dont often read poems twice, esspesually long ass ones like thiss... but, i read this not once, not twice, but three times... i love this poem. you are a brilliant writter... your comments mean so much to me... and i hope vis versa... anyways... i WOULD give it a ten.. but i guess... a five will surfise...

  • 12 years ago

    by Red Charm

    OH MAN that was so beautiful. You have a way with words like few writers I've seen. Totally amazing. WOW. I loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Red Charm

    If you ever need to talk or anything email me at angel1989inmomseyes@yahoo.com

  • 12 years ago

    by Mattie

    thats really good i like it. its way better then my poems

  • 11 years ago

    by pain is me

    Great job!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by shenoa

    "These marks on my body,From eternity’s undying resent,This inscription on my skin,From my pain and torment"

    I think this is my favorite line in this poem. Great choice of words.
    I really liked the description for each cut, wonderful flow.
    The true emotion and torment in this piece is fantastic. You did a great job expressing inner hated. 5/5