Comments : The Price We Pay

  • I absolutly love it! It sends such a great message. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more!

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wonderful poem! i really like the last stanza, amazing words!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    This was a great piece of poetry. It was really well written, and 'deep' for want of a better word. It flowed really well and was so heartfelt. Keep it up. I loved this poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Its sad that friends grow together while others grow apart, just hold on to the good memories and dont dwell on the bad. Cherish the time you did spend together, don't regret it :o)

    Eirisa

  • 19 years ago

    by Bredada

    grl yea i luv ur poem i can realte to it but instead of me doin muh friend rong she did me by messin wit my one year relationship "1st love" outta all my friends my life long b/f betru-yed me i give yo poem a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by black_hearted_lover

    that is a great poem i'm having a problem with one of my friends right now and it brought tears to my eyes

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    This such a good poem.I can relate to it alot!!! It had suck a good flow to it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    such* haha

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    wonderful poem. just wonderful. keep writting.

  • 19 years ago

    by oOXkonnXOo

    thats a great poem! it's so true, and so sad! keep up the great work

    -jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Great poem.. very good =)
    5 stars for you and tanx for your comments.
    Take Care from September

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    i have already commented on this poem. but i come back t it every day. its a wonderful poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    i love this! it's sad and so true and a great message to everyone that reads it! keep it up...and thanx so much for your comment it really meant alot..
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    This is an amazing poem. 5/5. keep up the good work. Love Emma xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Powerful poem, good read, Its always a shame when that happens to friendships. taje care xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    that is so true, i totally agree, and especially with the last lines....very very good job!
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    I thought that it flowed nicely, but sometimes it felt as though the rhyme was forced. Over all good job. Keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Fireflower

    wow.. the last stanza was really awesome!! i can relate alot. keep it up!

    vedali

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    great poem!! this is so true, i can totally relate!! thanx for your comments!!
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Exellent job on this poem! Very well written and true liked it alot!