To Open Those Doors...

by Broken   Mar 3, 2005


Something about you
Holds me tight
Draws me in
To my delight

The darkest day
Lights in an instant
As you step in my door
My smiles are persistent

Embracing me gently
I feel myself glow
Intense sensations
Inside me grow

Like an internal orgasm
Feelings of satisfaction
Utter most passion
Sourcing my attraction

Elevating my senses
To high authority
Returning the feeling
My main priority

My heart expands
To hold yours
Cradling it tenderly
To open those doors

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I hope you see that by "those doors" I mean returning the feeling. Well, I'd appreciate it so much if you commented or at least voted...thanks.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    5 stars! Loved it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Great poem! I loved it! I look forward to reading more of your stuff! Keep up the good work & God bless.

    Rebecca.

  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    wow its awsome i loved it keep it up
    take caree
    peaceee

  • 19 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    Good poem myhrr!! lol. I didn't understand it all...but then again it's 10:30 and i'm dead tired...lol...well i'll talk to you laterz...luv ya sis!! Good Job!!!

    --Sierra Rae

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ nice one. good poem
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit