Comments : This World

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    "This whole piece was a moment struck by lightening...when trapped beneath the water and convinced you're going to die...that moment of utter hopelessness and despair, when light cannot possibly penetrate the thick membranes with which you've strangled your mind with fear....unintentionally imprisoning it thus from salvation".
    Something a psychic would undoubtedley see, or close.
    Your impressionism is flawless, your stanza's are beautifully miserable, and its content is rich with vivid misery.
    Bold, frightening, and dark.

  • 12 years ago

    by pinkalias

    HOWD U DO THAT??

  • 12 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Hey THis is awesomw and beautifully written. Keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I believe in evolution and the scientific theorys of the way the earth came about. we have PROOF. And I didn't need to explain myself, but I did anyway.

  • 12 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Wow. This was so emotioanally said. You certainly had a lot on your mind when you were writing this. You should have more votes man, pure brilliance.
    -A

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgi

    beautiful gave it a 5 xxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Steve

    I seriously think you should consider publishing!