Hey I absolutely love love this poem. It's a very talented write.

thanxz

I really liked this poem but i think you need a little structure to it and i think if you did that, then it would be a truely wonderful peice of literature, i know that your a very talented writer.

Hey writing like me isn't all bad now is it kiddo? i mean i am sure that your a wonderful and talented writer all your own, you don't need to write like me because i am me and you are you, that is what makes the world a place that should be lived in...that and children...for they are the most innocent things on this earth...and truely are amazing...they can make your life seem so much better.

Five/Five

Signed,
Dark Savior