i really liked this it wasamazing!
i dont live with my dad and havnt seen him for years and its like hes dead to but atleast ur dad didnt choose to leave well wat im tryin 2 say it that i wish i could help i think i kinda no what ur goin thou oh dnt worri it was brilliant!! lilkit xx
oh gad!!!! im so sorry for ur loss!!! I havent lost my dad so i dont have a clue what ur going thru! but i lost my grandad when i was 8! he was like my dad! i live with my dad.. i have arguements with him... but i guess i have to be greatful for actually having a dad! very good poem! if u ever wanna talk! im here!!! firstname.lastname@example.org!
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hayley xxxx 5/5
I loved your poem. It is really good. I still have my dad. I don't know what I would do without him. Hes my world. I am here for you.Its okay. If you ever need anyone to talk to then you know that I am here for you.