Comments : My Dad: Dead And Gone Forever

  • 12 years ago

    by lifes big mistake

    i really liked this it wasamazing!
    i dont live with my dad and havnt seen him for years and its like hes dead to but atleast ur dad didnt choose to leave well wat im tryin 2 say it that i wish i could help i think i kinda no what ur goin thou oh dnt worri it was brilliant!! lilkit xx

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    That is really sad, Im sorry for your loss it is an amazing poem well done tkae care xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    wonderful poem but i am so sorry for your loss. i hope you'll get through this.

  • 12 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    a great poem with lots of meaning. i reallyl iked this one. i'll check out some more of your poetry (a 5/5)

  • 12 years ago

    by Incognito

    Nice poem. Sorry bout ur dad. Dat was beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Emma

    I am really sorry to hear about this, I am here if you need anything. This has been written really well and you are a really talented writer. Love Emma xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Emma

    Forgot to mention 5/5. Keep writing. Love Emma xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    thats a beautiful poem, my dad didnt actually die but he's out my life forever, so i can definately relate. keep up the amazing work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amilo

    I'd hate to criticize a poem that holds so much emotion and sorrow for you.

    but...if I stretch my imagination a bit, I guess I can feel a stab of pain every now and then as I read the poem.

    I'm very sorry about your dad.. I wish the best for you.

  • 12 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    that was a really great poem, and soooo sad, im sorry for your lost, keep up the great wrriting!!

  • 12 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    beautiful poem, it touches my heart and im so sorry for my loss, 5.5
    Samz*~

  • 12 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    woah u have amazing ability to put feelings into prose
    very well done indeeds
    be strong and may god bless you
    hugs from me too:)

  • 12 years ago

    by latin girl

    Great poem. five stars

  • 12 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Very sad poem, and I hope everything okay now. I liked that poem though, cuz it was very well written and the flow was good too. 5 for this one! Ja hoppas att du har det bra!
    SatuzKa

  • 12 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    oh gad!!!! im so sorry for ur loss!!! I havent lost my dad so i dont have a clue what ur going thru! but i lost my grandad when i was 8! he was like my dad! i live with my dad.. i have arguements with him... but i guess i have to be greatful for actually having a dad! very good poem! if u ever wanna talk! im here!!! goldigga18@hotmail.com!
    *plz check out my poems*
    hayley xxxx 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jordan

    Im really sorry about your dad. But everything happens for a reason and in the end you will realize why God took your dad. :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Bonnie Fowler

    I loved your poem. It is really good. I still have my dad. I don't know what I would do without him. Hes my world. I am here for you.Its okay. If you ever need anyone to talk to then you know that I am here for you.

    R.I.P

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Loved the poem and sorry for your loss. Keep the memories of your dad in your heart forever. Hugs and Love, Angela 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Shy

    5/5
    that's all i can say

  • 12 years ago

    by Vicious Tragedy â„¢

    wow... deep. I like that poem and I am sorry for your loss (5/5)