Excellent write... you never dissapoint me... I sometimes name poems after my mood, emotion, etc... So, maybe "hurt', or "betrayed", or "FU, I saw it coming".... just a thought... Take care... Hope to hear from you soon

tear me down, hidden lies...idk neways great job on the poem. >3jess

I think the title fits perfectly.
I LOVE this piece.
You displayed such utter betrayl from a person that you cherished, it pulled the reader into your reality with the sense of manipulation and distraught that was brought upon in the piece.
I loved these lines,
"Drink away all you think you can
You'll never escape the pain
Climb the broken walls of sanity
But they'll never keep you sane"
I LOVED those lines, really captivated me with the anger and resentment.

Also admired these lines, greatly,
"Cut away what you can bleed
Leave the embers by the knife
Skin peeled back and severed
Scab, rip, slit, and slice"
I loved that you created such graphic violence with the sufferage of the betrayl.
Excellent, excellent work

Wow, what a powerful poem. You have a lot of talent. I really like the way that you express yourself through the words.

you saw me listen, i heard you lie.
tho i dont know whats wrong with the original. lv A, x

This is a brilliant poems. your v.talented. i came up wit 'you said' for the title.keep up the great work xxxxxxxxx