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by Robyn Park   Mar 9, 2005


Life is a prison,
Oh God let me out.
No one to listen,
to hear when you shout.

Climb the walls of insanity,
Ride the waves of despair.
If you fall it doesn't matter,
There's no one to care.

Used to wish for a window,
to see birds, trees and sky,
But you're better without one -
Stops you aiming too high.

Watching freedom is painful,
For those locked away.
Seeing joy, love and happiness,
Another price that you pay.

Strong is good, weak is bad.
Be it false, be it true.
Your mind makes the choice,
And enforces it too.

Cell walls built by society,
With rules to adhere.
If you breach the acceptable,
You had better beware.

Hide the pain, carry on,
Routine is the key.
Don't let on that you're not,
What you're pretending to be.

Lock it all up inside you,
How badly that bodes.
Look out for that one day,
When it all just explodes.

Leaving naught but a shell,
Base functionality too.
But killing all else,
That was uniquely you.

So how do you grow,
with a time bomb inside?
Or how to defuse it,
without destroying its ride?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Easily Forgotten

    That was the most amazing poem I have read so far!! Excellent job..you write very well in all your poems.. keep it up i enjoy reading them :)

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Nice job sad but you got the point across good

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    I really like this...It seems like the words were taken from my mouth. I wrote a poem with the similar idea. it is called "Trapped in a prison" Stay strong and hold on hun, everything will be okay in the end. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    I loved it. The wording, the imagery, the flow...it all went together wonderfully. Awesome job.

  • 18 years ago

    by *HauntedByMemories*

    Wow, I liked that. That was very well writen. Well done. 5/5. Thanks for the coment, means alot to me!