I like this. you had a creative idea to put together a piece that inerracts with all sorts of people, using the repetition lines to describe each person living through a state of darkness or uneasiness. I really admired these lines,
"Some people think its easy,
To live and not to breathe,"
Those lines I thought were really powerful and displayed much pain. I also admired these lines,
"Some people try to kill the pain,
Hide it behind their eyes,"
You really portrayed the mask people can wear to decieve the most informed of their pain. Well done

This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over him just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem.

Hey! thank u guys!! i wrote it in school!!!!

woah this is woah OMG i love it its gr8 excellent amazing u should enter into a poetry contest or sumthign tis denfinetly 1 of the best poems ive read 2 day even tho i sed it in my other comment this tops all gr8 job :)5/5

okay seriously, read this to yourself

Some people think its easy,
To live and not to breathe,
Those people are the people,
Destined only to deceive.

Some people live unhappily,
This will never change,
Those people are the people,
Forced to rearrange.

Some people try to kill the pain,
Hide it behind their eyes,
Those people are the people,
Who once believed the lies.

Some people throw their life away,
Some never look back,
Those people are the people,
Their hearts all hold a crack.

Some people think its OK,
To break another's heart,
Those people are the people,
Who were broken from the start.

Some people try to hide themselves,
Behind a wall of hate,
Those people are the people,
Who have already met their fate.

Some people are simply confused,
And don't know what to do,
Those people are the people,
Just like me and you.

Some people could care less,
What happens in their life,
Those people are the people,
Living everyday in strife.

Some people try to stop it,
Kill the painful lies,
Those people are the people,
Forced to compromise.

Some people try to hide themselves,
Behind the things they say,
Those people are the people,
The same, each and everyday.

Some people are rebels,
Going against everyone Else's right,
Those people are the people,
Who WILL put up a fight.

Some people are the cause,
Of this problem in the world,
Those people are the people,
Who laughed as the chaos unfurled.

Some people are just killing,
The souls inside of us,
Those people are the people,
Losing all our trust.

When all the light turns dark,
And every things not alright,
Some people will be there to say,
"So long and goodnight."

Those people are the people,
We trust to agree,
Those people are the people,
Just like you and me.

do you realize how awesome of a writer you are? what inspired you to start writing? i've been told i have great work, but nothing like this, seriously! you are excellent, you should publish your own book someday, let me know if you do, i'll be your first customer! totally a five !!!

that was REALLY good.5/5.