aww...so sorry for them...glad they're okay, and I hope they're doing better...amazing write hun...you're so amazing <33 xxx love you

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Wow, that poem was very shocking and had hope at the end, hope things turn out alright for them, keep it up xxx

omg.. that story seriously made me cry.. oh.. oh my god... my mighty, loving.. saving God.... wow.. that's like.. all i can say right now...

Sad poem ,sorry to hear dat. Great job on combing those stories. Good luck.
peaze.

wow... that brings tears to my eyes... i don't see how anyone could do that to someone.. that's a sad story, but it's awesome writing... you did a good job.. keep up the good work, you've got talent

wow that was sad poem but good it put tears in my eyes wow. Im sorry for what happened to them. Thank the lord that they made it. your a good friend for allways being there.

My friend was raped by her own father when she was 10 years old until she was 17. 7 years! I am so glad her family finally got away from that monster. You are truly gifted, and just from reading these comments, you can see the amazing effect you have on the people who read this. Touch as many people as you can. Situations like these, the brutallity must be stopped, and you are an amazing person who is making that dream slowly come into focus. Thank you for are you're contributing even if you don't realize you are.
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Katie Mahony

*Thank you for 'all' you're contributing even if you don't realize you are.

i am so sorry for your three friends. some times i hope they are ok. there are some nice guys out there. not every guy or man is the same. i have some friends(guys) and i work with them like every nite till 11 alone in a store. and normaly its only me,and two other guys. and no adults around but thanks god they treat me like a prnces. lol. any way so i am trying to say that there are nice people arond the world you just have to trust***

check out my poems some time. please read my featured poem ROSE. means alot to me.... thanks
luv~!!~
nida

Creatively written (by your comment) Just be careful of spelling errors (first stanza) besides this I found it chilling and disgusting but amazingly written!

Omg that was a really good poem. It hurts to hear that. Tonight i'll pray for all the girls who go through this...='o(

wow dude that made me cry. i don't know what I would do if that happened to me. You are like such a strong writer. I loved it. It was so sad. and it really happened. how could people be so mean.

wow

Great poem, 5/5.

Wow, shivers and tears. good writing. x x x x