Comments : My Stolen Soul

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    okk i'll be honest with u ..i didn't like the way uve potrayed the subject,which itself is getting pretty old as far as dark poems go,,,i think a little more of description would have helped the piece a lot...
    that being said,i completely agree with you that anyone can improve.i like ur rhyming scheme and the emotion uve tried to potray
    keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    As I start to sink to the ground
    I'm now watching from above
    As my body is quickly liquefied
    A creature of evil, I am now one of

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    i thought tht was lovely

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! amazing and chilling, i love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Disturbing. And hopefully, if this is based on actual dreams, may your dreams take a different and more light turn.

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    This is another good poem and you are a really talented writer. 5/5. Love Emma xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000


    check out my poems some times. means alot to me thanks
    luv
    nida
    wonderful

  • 19 years ago

    by asdfg

    Wow, really good.. Keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow ive not read any dark & fantasy poems before but really enjoyed this one!!!would luv to hear ur views on my poems! excellent work xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    Bravo! An awsome poem, I really liked the whole poem, don't know how to word it, but great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Anthony

    good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ very nice poem, excellent!
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Randy Lee

    Very nice, thanks for the comments on mine. Keep em comin.

  • 18 years ago

    by broken angel

    Very well written. My honest opinion. I liked the ending and it's just such a stunning poem. Keep up the amazing work.
    Luv KT

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Very powerful...and very dark. stay strong
    xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    Amazing its been a while since I have been here. Your poems are still so detailed and touch me to my core as always. Have a lovely day:)

  • 18 years ago

    by cuddelyxbutxviciousXxX

    Hi again! sorry i wasn't here to write u, but, i just moved and it's been a helluva journey!! w/b sumtime k? i like this poem btw keep writing, it kinda reminded me of myself especially about the whole "they want me to conform..." thing, i can relate. well g2g so w/b willya cya l8r!!! if u don't remember me im Moxie, i just changed the name